You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had - Explain to them how you feel about what happened - Let them know what actions you would like them to take.
Hi Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you about one problem that I faced when I used your hotel facility. I am coming to your city for my business, and
also
I really need to use the phone
for my business contact. I have noticed your phone
not working.
I am nervous because I should have some necessary calls to many companies and also
I don have sufficient time for this
topic. furthermore
, a big part of my work going to solve by phone
.
I know about electronics and I found the phone
's problem. likely this
is related to their mic because people can not hear my sound. if you find a mic I can change it or I can buy that. please let me know about your decision. I am in a hurry for repairing this
device.
I am looking forward to hearing your answer.
Yours sincerely.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite