disscuss advantages and disadvanteage online learning

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It is an inevitable fact that the more someone learns,the more equipped the person is.In
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,essay we are going to discuss the benefits and drawbacks of online education On the one hand,online study helps a plethora of
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to continue their interest in learning.Especially for
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,who need to work part-time to support their families and resulting in missing lectures.Due to
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school
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are best for their flexible timing and
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for recording class facilities.
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,online classes can be easily accessible on any electronic gadget,all you need is a potent internet connection.
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are taken for college students
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teachers are available around the clock for aiding
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during their exams through online rank.
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,there are some limitations for the audience to join online degrees like zooms and Teams applications,due to which many admissions are facing problems attending the class,
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,in online ,coaching it is
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to impossible for a tutor to verify all pupils are showing attention to his/her presentation.To strengthen
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viewpoint,There are many online certification collections,where
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just switched off their cameras and start doing some other activity.
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facing problems like the audio and video part not showing as they need to display and that confuse
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due to a lack of understanding of the information. To recapitulate ,knowledge is the only tool that helps to upgrade poverty and unemployment in any country.
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,there are some drawbacks yet it is beneficial for enlistment ,who really try hard to get knowledge.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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