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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Smith, I am aware of your complaints through your letter, regarding the noise from my apartment. I will like to apologise for the discomfort
this
 has caused you for the past few days because I later got to know that you leave for
work
 very early and always want to have good sleep at night. The disturbance has been due to the
time
 difference between Australia and Nigeria which is 7hrs,
therefore
, Australia is ahead and
this
 distorts the communication
time
 between me and my family in Australian
time
. Because of
this
, the easiest
time
 I can give them a call is around 12am in Australia and which is 5pm in Nigeria because my parents would have been back from
work
 at
this
time
.
However
, I will definitely find a solution to
this
 in order to preserve your sleeping times.
Thus
, I will make an arrangement with my parent and find out their break
time
 at
work
. With
this
, the communication
time
 will fall into the afternoon in Australian
time
 and you will still be at
work
. I hope you will forgive me and hope
this
 solution would resolve the issue. Thank you for your understanding. Regards Peter.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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