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People change their career and place of residence several times during their life. Is it a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays,
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graduates always choose to work in big cities like Shanghai or Beijing. They have to rent an apartment and have to
change
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 residence when they
change
their
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jobs
. There is a fierce debate about whether it’s a good development or not for employees. In my perspective, the advantages of changing
jobs
 and
residences
 outweigh its disadvantages.
To begin
 with, the
first
 advantage of changing
jobs
 and addresses is that men and women could get
better
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a better
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salary
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salaries
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. In the fast
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 society, employees normally get
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a promotion
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promotion
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promotions
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 by changing their
jobs
. In that way, they can better understand the principle of the position and they can get
well
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 with colleagues who do the same
jobs
with
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 them.
Moreover
, not all
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job seekers have the luck to find a job that
are
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 suitable for them, when they feel hard to adjust to the atmosphere of the
company
, they would
change
 the situation by changing
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jobs
.
In addition
, moving house could let people know the cities better, as they deeply live a life in the place.
However
, there are
also
 many disadvantages when people
change
 their careers and places of
residences
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.
Firstly
, it will leave a bad impression
for
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the
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human resources management. The
company
 may think of the employee as
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 person who will not stay
at
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 the position for a long time.
Secondly
, it will influence the benefits of the
company
. The
company
 should always find and train the employees, which will impact the efficiency of
producing
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 and
rise
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raise
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 the cost. At the same time, changing
residences
 will lead to
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 sense of
strange
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 between the graduates and their
neighbors
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. In
conclude
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, every
change
 of
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jobs
 and locations is
no
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 wasteful but carefully considered. So in my view,
although
 there are some side -effects, it is still worthwhile for youngsters to
change
 careers and
residences
.
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