In the past people used to live their entire life in one place. Nowadays they live in several different places during their life. What are the reasons for this change? Is it a positive or a negative trend?
People
in
one century ago who need Change preposition
apply
move in
distance may only by horses, but nowadays while technology getting Add a hyphen
move-in
envoluting
, there are so many options Correct your spelling
evolution
people
can use for travelling. In my own Correct your spelling
opinion
opnion
, it is Correct your spelling
opinion
a
positive that Change the article
apply
people
can travel by convenient transport system.
Firstly
, for
Change preposition
from
economical
perspective, globalization Correct article usage
an economical
boost
Change the verb form
boosts
job
market by trading goods Correct article usage
the job
to
different countries.Change preposition
with
For example
, Japanese culture nowaday
spreading whole the world, you can find Correct your spelling
nowadays
the
Japanese brands in every country, Correct article usage
apply
it
means these Japanese Correct pronoun usage
which
enterprise
enter Change the determiner
enterprises
in
overseas,bringing job opportunities for locals at the same time.
Change preposition
apply
Secondly
,the
Correct article usage
apply
people
who has
Change the verb form
have
good
working ability may choose Add an article
the good
Add an article
a better
the better
better paid
job.Add a hyphen
better-paid
For instance
, if an
Taiwanese engineer has Change the article
a
Correct article usage
the world
world
top skills Change noun form
world's
of
programming, the pay Change preposition
in
of
Change preposition
for
same
position in Change the article
the same
USA
would be much better than Correct article usage
the USA
Taiwan
.In the other words, if a person is Change preposition
in Taiwan
Add an article
the talent
a talent
talent
Replace the word
talented
of
something , Change preposition
at
for instance
, very good at play
Replace the word
playing
violin
, going to Germany to develop their career would Correct article usage
the violin
much
better than they stay in India or Nepal due to Add a missing verb
be much
lack
of resources.
Correct article usage
a lack
Third
of all, a
forty Correct article usage
apply
country
always Fix the agreement mistake
countries
welcoming
Wrong verb form
welcome
the
Correct article usage
apply
Correct your spelling
immigration
immigrants
immigrators
.In Correct your spelling
immigrants
a
common sense Correct article usage
apply
about
the forty countries like Change preposition
apply
USA
or Canada, Correct article usage
the USA
is
setting a completing Correct subject-verb agreement
are
immigrate
system. The more different cultures poured in, the more world view Replace the word
immigrant
people
have, enhencing
Correct your spelling
enhancing
people
inspire
their Fix the infinitive
to inspire
mind
of invention or management.
In Fix the agreement mistake
minds
Correct your spelling
conclusion
conlusion
, there are so many good factors of globalization, Correct your spelling
conclusion
government
Add an article
the government
also
should encourage people
do
not Unnecessary verb
apply
stay
in one place onlyFix the infinitive
to stay
Add the comma(s)
, therefore,
therefore
locals can get in touch with different cultures thus
Correct word choice
and thus
learning
from Wrong verb form
learn
it
.Correct pronoun usage
them
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