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In the past people used to live their entire life in one place. Nowadays they live in several different places during their life. What are the reasons for this change? Is it a positive or a negative trend?

#people #life #place #places #change #trend
People
in
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one century ago who need
move in
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 distance may only by horses, but nowadays while technology getting
envoluting
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evolution
, there are so many options
people
 can use for travelling. In my own
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opinion
opnion
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opinion
, it is
a
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positive that
people
 can travel by convenient transport system.
Firstly
,
for
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from
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economical
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an economical
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 perspective, globalization
boost
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boosts
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job
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the job
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 market by trading goods
to
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with
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 different countries.
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, Japanese culture
nowaday
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nowadays
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 spreading whole the world, you can find
the
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Japanese brands in every country,
it
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which
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 means these Japanese
enterprise
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enterprises
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 enter
in
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overseas,bringing job opportunities for locals at the same time.
Secondly
,
the
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people
 who
has
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have
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good
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the good
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 working ability may choose
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a better
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better paid
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better-paid
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 job.
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, if
an
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 Taiwanese engineer has
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the world
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world
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world's
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 top skills
of
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 programming, the pay
of
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for
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same
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the same
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 position in
USA
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the USA
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 would be much better than
Taiwan
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in Taiwan
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.In the other words, if a person is
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the talent
a talent
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talent
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talented
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of
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at
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 something ,
for instance
, very good at
play
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playing
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violin
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the violin
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, going to Germany to develop their career would
much
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be much
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 better than they stay in India or Nepal due to
lack
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a lack
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 of resources.
Third
 of all,
a
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forty
country
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countries
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 always
welcoming
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welcome
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the
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apply
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immigration
immigrants
immigrators
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immigrants
.In
a
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common sense
about
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the forty countries like
USA
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the USA
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 or Canada,
is
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are
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 setting a completing
immigrate
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 system. The more different cultures poured in, the more world view
people
 have,
enhencing
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enhancing
people
inspire
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to inspire
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 their
mind
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minds
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 of invention or management. In
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conclusion
conlusion
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conclusion
, there are so many good factors of globalization,
government
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the government
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also
 should encourage
people
do
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not
stay
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to stay
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 in one place only
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, therefore,
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therefore
 locals can get in touch with different cultures
thus
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and thus
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learning
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learn
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 from
it
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them
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