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Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree?

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The chart gives data regarding the weekly incomes of those who earn different education degrees in 2002, split by age group. Overall, all graduates’ earnings consistently grew before they reach 40 with the highest number
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 to those who acquire other qualifications. After age 40, the earning patterns
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. We can see that the weekly incomes were all low at the beginning, with the highest
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 420 from “other”.
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 they all soared up.
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those who have other credentials earned approximately 810 per week
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the overall highest figure and the other two categories both reached 700. By marked contrast, the
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 of the ‘others’ declined across senior ages, tailing off to slightly less than 700. The number
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 ones with
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 in their senior and elderly years with a slight dip during their late 40s.
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, those with higher degrees continued to earn more, reaching the
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 spike at around 750 in their early 40s and peaking at nearly 800 in the oldest group.
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