Unemployment remains the biggest challenge for school leavers. To what extent do you agree? What other challenges do young people face today?

n the present age,

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continues to be a huge challenge for

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leavers. I believe that

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economy with companies requiring

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experience

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from young

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and the government trying to keep an

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rate.

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,

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is not the only difficulty that youth faces today.

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of all, it is becoming harder to find a

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for

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leavers because they lack

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experience

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. Many companies want to hire experienced workers as

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insurance

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the

work

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will be done correctly. Finding a

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that doesn’t require

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experience

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can be quite a challenge. A great way to gain

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experience

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is doing charity

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and volunteering, but for that, a person needs to have time to spare which not everyone has. Another thing that adds to the

unemployment

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problem for younger

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is that the government tries to keep an

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rate of about 2% at all times.

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system provides an opportunity to switch jobs for

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build a career.

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,

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model benefits new businesses. The problem for young

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is that they usually fall in that percentage of

unemployment

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, because of a lack of working

experience

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. Another big challenge that young

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face after finishing

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is starting an independent life.

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includes a lot of things like acquiring their own place to live, learning how to maintain that place, making their own plans, appointments with no help from parents or guardians and paying bills and rent.

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can be quite tricky because the

school

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doesn’t teach young

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basic life skills that can be necessary when living independently. They can of course turn to their parents for help, but not everyone has

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a privilege. Of course, none of these challenges can even begin before a young person finds a

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because to live independently

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need to have a steady income. To conclude I believe that

unemployment

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is the main problem that young

people

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face after finishing

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.

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is mainly because of how the

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market is built. Other challenges can only begin after finding a

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.