Some people say it is more important to plant trees in towns and cities than to build housing. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been suggested that

people

prefer to plant trees where they live.

Although

not everyone will side with me in

this

regard, I entirely agree with the statement. Those whose position is contrary to mine come up with a couple of reasons to justify the position they hold.

First

and foremost, they believe that the number of

people

increase

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every year. In that case, society should think about

apartment

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However

people

put the responsibility of flat. If

people

do not have

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apartment, where will they live?

In addition

this

, they argue that some population think that building houses are more important, as far as, I am improving the value of land is more vital in order to build houses safely. Turning to

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my opinion regarding the matter, I have three reasons for my substantiation.

Firstly

, oxygen is more influential than

house

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a house

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, If the government makes a decision to plant trees,

instead

of buildings or squares,

this

will be beneficial for all members of society, as they can enjoy the beauty of nature and relax.

Secondly

, If we will start to plant trees, we have

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possibility to do

a wood

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wood

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For instance

, we may sell

this

wood

foreign

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countries and make money.

Finally

, urban greening might help improve air quality and cool cities on hot summer days. Hopefully, these arguments suffice to prove my rectitude. On the basis of everything that has been articulated, I can confidently express my agreement with the statement albeit the

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of some.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in towns and cities than to build housing. Do you agree or disagree?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.

More and more people are working from rather than at the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss both advantages and disadvantage of advertising. Include reasons and any revelant examples to support your answer.

Many people buy products that they do not really need and replace old products with new ones unnecessarily. Why do people buy things they do not really need? Do you think this is a good thing?