Do you believe that professional athletes make good role models for young people?

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Expert sportspersons, Who play sports very well, are nice
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for
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, that are growing up, to follow. While I agree that
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should learn from them, I believe that they have something we ought not to study. On the one hand, I agree that they are an admirable person, not only excellent but
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hard-working.
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, every day, the athlete has to diligently train which can make them tired, bored and hurt.
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. They are still tolerant of that feeling
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of giving up.
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, Messi, who is the greatest footballer of all time, has attempted very much to become a person whom everyone in the world knows him. He has exercised sixteen hours a day since he was young.
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, the sportsperson must live healthily so that make them can recover after difficult practice. They always keep
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lifestyle in their life,
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, it is important for all athletes.
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, Sportspersons usually cope with criticism because of their terrible performance. It is very difficult to overcome so, for going to succeed, we have to take it
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ourselves.
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, Foden has to receive many bad words and he has trained very much to become an excellent midfielder in the Man City team. On other hand, I believe that some athletes have bad hobbies which are performed in talk, and action. Because of getting much praise., they become superior, even having many incorrect activities and crimes.
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, Ronaldo broke the phone of a child and he
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sit in court as he evaded taxation. In conclusion, young
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should study personality, determined, and industrious from those who play sports except Ronaldo
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