The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph provides the total amount
enrolment
of students
at Australian universities belong native and foreign students
throughout the last
decades.
Overall
, the total number enrolment
of students
native and foreign increased over the period given, while
local students
remained stable for the last
4 years
. in the other hand, the commencing enrolment
for overseas students
gradually rise every year, while
the native student
fluctuates slowly. The interesting information is the overseas student
whole is less than local in all grades in the year range given.
The totality of overseas student
enlistment rose by approximately 5000 to 7000 submitted from 2001 to 2007. In that same range of years
, the commencing overseas student
gradually increased by about 150 to 200 students
. Moreover
, in the span of the last
three years
, The quantity of overseas student
enrolment
dramatically go up from approximately 65.000 to a peak at about 82.000 students
while
the commencing dramatically grow from about 30.000 to 41.000 students
.
Not to speak of the amount of enrolment
local students
dramatically go up from 400.000 to approximately 601.000 students
in span 2001 to 2007. After rising up, the total amount steady at approximately 601.000 students
. Henceforth, the commencing slowly increase in 2001 to 2002 about 500.000 students
and continue to slowly decrease until 2006. The commencing slowly rises up again about 10.000 students
in 2 years
span and slowly drop in the last
three years
at a low point about 200.100 students
.Submitted by adintakaglhsin on
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