The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provides the total amount
enrolment
of
students
at Australian universities belong native and foreign
students
throughout the
last
decades.
Overall
, the total number
enrolment
of
students
native and foreign increased over the period given,
while
local
students
remained stable for the
last
4
years
. in the other hand, the commencing
enrolment
for overseas
students
gradually rise every year,
while
the native
student
fluctuates slowly. The interesting information is the overseas
student
whole is less than local in all grades in the year range given. The totality of overseas
student
enlistment rose by approximately 5000 to 7000 submitted from 2001 to 2007. In that same range of
years
, the commencing overseas
student
gradually increased by about 150 to 200
students
.
Moreover
, in the span of the
last
three
years
, The quantity of overseas
student
enrolment
dramatically go up from approximately 65.000 to a peak at about 82.000
students
while
the commencing dramatically grow from about 30.000 to 41.000
students
. Not to speak of the amount of
enrolment
local
students
dramatically go up from 400.000 to approximately 601.000
students
in span 2001 to 2007. After rising up, the total amount steady at approximately 601.000
students
. Henceforth, the commencing slowly increase in 2001 to 2002 about 500.000
students
and continue to slowly decrease until 2006. The commencing slowly rises up again about 10.000
students
in 2
years
span and slowly drop in the
last
three
years
at a low point about 200.100
students
.
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