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Some people say that art subjects such as music, drama and creative writing are an essential part of education and every school should include them in its syllabus.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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While some
children
 enjoy
art
 classes at school, others might feel frustrated during those activities. Though I do not think that
art
 lessons should be obligatory for every high school syllabus, I am assured that
art
 education might be profoundly
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beneficial
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beneficial
 for every child in elementary school. I will support my opinion with
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First
,
art
 education can help kids to develop a range of self, social, and cognitive skills, which are transferable in any area of
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 and adult life. Drawing can teach anyone how to focus and be attentive to details; drama encourages us to train empathy and develop strong communication and collaboration skills; music reveals hidden
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harmony
 and math behind sounds.
Moreover
, arts equip humans with different
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ways
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was
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ways
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 of learning: more subjective, emotional, and introspective.
This
 can help
children
 to understand themselves and
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 around
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different
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perispective
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perspective
perspectives
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 to,
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, scientific approaches. All these benefits provide young people with wider opportunities to explore themselves
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 early life stages and prepare for their future.
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, arts take different forms and present kids
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range of opportunities to discover something that will resonate with nearly everyone. Quiet and introspective kids might prefer
beauty
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 of painting and drawing. Expressive and physically active
children
 might find that dances are a great channel to express themselves. It is not that important which
art
 form a kid might choose. What is more important is that any
art
 activity might become a solid foundation for building a child`s confidence and identity. To conclude, I do think that the more
children
 are exposed to different
art
 activities, the wider opportunity for
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 they will get. That would surely help
children
 to become more
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self-aware
self aware
 and, hopefully, fulfilled adults.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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