In many countires, there are an increasing number of private cars. What are the advantages and disadvtanges of this trend?
In recent years, an immense amount of
cars
are in the streets that the vast majority of them use individually. So, increasing
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an increasing
number
of private Correct article usage
the number
cars
have both benefit and drawback. However
, I believe in, its disadvantages is
obviously more than its advantages.
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are
first
, nowadays, we see the
large number Correct article usage
a
private
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of private
cars
in the cities compared to the past which show
families can buy easily Change the verb form
shows
car
. Accordingly
, there are a lot of services which can be obtained by having a car
in each family. For example
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a family
family
in which there is at least Fix the agreement mistake
families
a
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one
car
, probably have easier transportation for family members such
as kids, As a result
, this
type of family can have a short road trip in
the weekends.
Another point is that there are a lot of different drawbacks Change preposition
at
for
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to
increasing
number of private Add an article
an increasing
the increasing
cars
which has definitely negative
impact on the other aspects of people's life.According to the clear evidence, global warming, increasing Add an article
a negative
the
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apply
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greenhouse
green house
gases and air Correct your spelling
greenhouse
pullotion
are just parts of Correct your spelling
pollution
uncontrol
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the uncontrol
using
of Replace the word
use
cars
in the urbans
. Correct your spelling
urban
Consequently
, when every family is interested in driving their own car
, we mostly have no clean weather in the big cities worldwide. I believe that in order to have healthy
life for ourselves and keep the earth Add an article
a healthy
also
inhabitable for the Correct your spelling
future
futuer
, we Correct your spelling
future
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must
most
avoid modern Correct your spelling
must
lifestyles
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lifestyle
behavior
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behaviour
such
as using much
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many
the
private Correct article usage
apply
cars
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instead
ingested
inested
of utilizing public transportation.
In conclusion, our world is under the Correct your spelling
instead
influence
of our Wrong verb form
influenced
action
and decision Fix the agreement mistake
actions
such
as having tendency
to drive Add an article
a tendency
the tendency
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personal
persnonal
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personal
cars
in unnesseccery moments. Thus
, once in a while we should swallow our selfishness and try to make a concerted effect to make a better and clean
world.Replace the word
cleaner
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...