We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Computers
are the product of the modern world and the rapid technological development we
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in. Eventually, we should be thankful and grateful for its opportunities. Today, we find it difficult to get through a working day without it.
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computers
in the foreseeable future.
Besides
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this
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society.
To begin
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computers
will be used in performing daily chores in the house.
For instance
. Cleaning the floors can be done with minimum effort and time involved with the advent of robot maids.
In addition
, nowadays teachers can use
computers
for teaching students online by staying
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the help of
this
tool.
Thus
, it is clearly seen from the
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situation that online teaching is becoming more and more popular, so
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computers
will be widely used not only in household work
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but
also
for teaching purposes.
However
uncontrolled usage of
this
very convenient tool has pretty many disadvantages.
First
of all, it looks like human beings will be replaced by machines leading to
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unemployment which in its turn will provoke a rise in
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within the nation.
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presence of teachers in the classroom
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raise
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problems of discipline
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the students.
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and thereby, will cause a hindrance in the nation’s social growth. In a nutshell, analyzing the above it can be concluded that
computers
will be used for various activities at homes s well as at educational institutions in the future. Albeit, the excessive utilization of
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machines can boost the issues related to
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young people’s development. It is
thus
hoped that people will be made aware of the harmfulness of relying too much on
computers
.
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  • Artificial Intelligence (AI)
  • Machine Learning
  • Automated
  • Internet of Things (IoT)
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  • Healthcare Industry
  • Reliance
  • Privacy
  • Human Interaction
  • Job Displacement
  • Automation
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