We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?
Computers
are the product of the modern world and the rapid technological development we are
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This
essay will extensively explain the usage of computers
in the foreseeable future. Besides
, I will analyze how this
dependency will have negative impacts on the
society.
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To begin
with, I am absolutely sure that in the nearest future the
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computers
will be used in performing daily chores in the house. For instance
. Cleaning the floors can be done with minimum effort and time involved with the advent of robot maids. In addition
, nowadays teachers can use computers
for teaching students online by staying at
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computers
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for teaching purposes.
However
uncontrolled usage of this
very convenient tool has pretty many disadvantages. First
of all, it looks like human beings will be replaced by machines leading to the
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, the social development of these pupils will be hared
and thereby, will cause a hindrance in the nation’s social growth.
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computers
will be used for various activities at homes s well as at educational institutions in the future. Albeit, the excessive utilization of this
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hoped that people will be made aware of the harmfulness of relying too much on computers
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