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Discussion In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays. we witness many
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 who want to spend a lot of time at home and they are rearing children rather than
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. I strongly believe that
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 is a negative approach for family and
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 for society. The essay will check both views. There are many disadvantages to
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 topic. with changes in
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 in the family lead to many drawbacks. one of the most important of
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 related to culture. in many cultures is not suitable that
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 to go to work and
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 want to stay at home.
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,
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 will fade the
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 of
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 in society.
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, in my country,
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 is a very bad action that
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 to stay at home for a long time and
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 they should get responsible for earning money for their family. Other problems will create through
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 issue.
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 will suffer too many diseases for
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 happen they may suffer from depression
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 of
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 action.
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, in my country,
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 have the
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 of leader of the family and
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 happens can hurt
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 action.
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.
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 problem can be positive and useful for some families whose aims are good life and they do not notice
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 issue. and they believe that
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 and
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 have equal rights and
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 do not have any difference between
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 and
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.
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, we can see these types of persons in the progressive civilization in comparison to traditional civilization. In conclusion, I firmly believe that according to my nationality it's better for
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 to work out of their homes in order
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 going to solve many problems and
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 must rear their children because they do
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role
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 very better than
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.

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