Discussion In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays. we witness many

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who want to spend a lot of time at home and they are rearing children rather than

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. I strongly believe that

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is a negative approach for family and

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for society. The essay will check both views. There are many disadvantages to

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topic. with changes in

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in the family lead to many drawbacks. one of the most important of

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related to culture. in many cultures is not suitable that

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to go to work and

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want to stay at home.

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this

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will fade the

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in society.

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, in my country,

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is a very bad action that

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to stay at home for a long time and

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they should get responsible for earning money for their family. Other problems will create through

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issue.

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will suffer too many diseases for

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happen they may suffer from depression

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action.

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, in my country,

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have the

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of leader of the family and

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happens can hurt

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action.

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problem can be positive and useful for some families whose aims are good life and they do not notice

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issue. and they believe that

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and

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have equal rights and

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do not have any difference between

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and

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, we can see these types of persons in the progressive civilization in comparison to traditional civilization. In conclusion, I firmly believe that according to my nationality it's better for

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to work out of their homes in order

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going to solve many problems and

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must rear their children because they do

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very better than

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Discussion In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past, students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this developments?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think is a positive or a negative development?