A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer.He/she has a ask for your advice. write a letter to your friend,In your letter . explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday . describe some possible disadvantages . say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Sam, How are you? I hope

this

letter finds you well.I am writing

this

letter to you regarding the camping holiday in the summer.

To begin

with, the

first

time I went on a camping holiday was six years ago and I can remember that was really amazing and after ,that I am used to going every summer so I suppose you will completely enjoy

this

hobby ,

However

sometimes is harmful to some people.

For instance

,most of the time you should have an active and it is hard for a lazy child.

Moreover

, you may get injured while walking or do not have the Internet or a few more disadvantages because life in nature is sometimes different and difficult so it is better you will ready. In the end, I entirely enjoy coming with you if you like to go camping together and I am sure we can make a nice day. please keep me posted. Lots of love, Saeed Ezat.

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6Linking words
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8 paragraphs

161 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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