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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

#plastic #bags #bottles #environment #damage #governments #individuals
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In
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 modern era,
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substantial use of products made from
plastic
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 materials is causing a
life
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-long
detruction
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destruction
 to our nature.
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 essay will discuss the
repurcussion
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repercussions
repercussion
 of excessive use of
plastic
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 in our daily
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 followed by
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remedial actions to avoid its extensive use.
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 and foremost,
plastic
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 is considered to decay at the slowest pace as compared to other materials like paper,
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cardboard
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carboard
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,
woods
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 etc.
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 eventually
cause
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 a huge
environment
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environmental
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deface
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, as
it's
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 accumulation creates huge packs of dirt and even by burning it releases
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 amount of chemical gases in the air which creates air pollution. To illustrate
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, a study performed by UCL (The University College of London) states "In 2021, 300 million metric
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of
plastic
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 was produced in form of
plastic
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 bags and bottles out of which 73% was
disposed
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 in the Arabian Sea which led to low reproduction rate of sea
life
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.
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 shows,
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 birth
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life limiting
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 to 12 years compared to 16 years in 2020". If the possible blemish of
plastic
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 usage is not handled
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diligently
deligently
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diligently
, it will have ever-lasting effects on the mass. The government and community have to play a vital role in order to resolve it.
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 with, alternative materials should be used
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for
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 example, using recycled paper bags
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 of
plastics
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 bags.
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Moreover
Moverover
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, tax benefit schemes should be introduced
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benefits
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 the citizens with tax rebates if their usage of
plastic
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 is below the threshold.
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 will result in creating a healthy environment for
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humans as well as beings in the wild and sea. To exemplify, The English School (in Kuwait) introduced a policy that
pupil
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pupils
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 are only allowed to bring metal or glass water
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 which resulted in saving 18,000 kg of
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 per annum and
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, leaving a positive
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footprint
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foot-print
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on
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 the community. In a nutshell, I pen down saying that our earth is already under the influence of ozone layer damage and prospective effects of
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the nuclear
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test
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at
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 Japan, so
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 impairing it by using synthetic material like
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 can be
life
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threathening
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threatening
. Who wants to live in an environment where you cannot
breath
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 well and support your well-being?
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • ecosystems
  • wildlife
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • strict regulations
  • plastic consumption
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • sustainable packaging
  • recycling facilities
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