Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
According to the prompt, people believe that children should
be encourage
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be encouraged
be encouraging
for
initiative Change preposition
to
work
for Use synonyms
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community
in their free Add an article
the community
time
as unpaid which can be favourable for teenagers and Use synonyms
society
. Use synonyms
In
my perspective, I will Change preposition
From
agree
Add the preposition
onagree
toagree
withagree
this
statement by following two Linking Words
reason
that Change to a plural noun
reasons
are
given in below and support the thesis.
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is
First
of all, Linking Words
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the youngster
a youngster
youngster
should be involved Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
themselves
in social Correct pronoun usage
apply
work
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in
unpaid and Change preposition
apply
this
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work
will create positive attitudes towards Use synonyms
the
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apply
society
. During Use synonyms
spare
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their spare
time
, they should be utilizing their Use synonyms
time
by supporting Use synonyms
the
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apply
society
that can anything Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
encourage
the child for their future goal and giving proper Wrong verb form
encouraging
guide
according to their condition. Replace the word
guidance
for instance
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country
like INDIA, Add an article
a country
huge
amount Add an article
the huge
a huge
the
population Correct article usage
apply
in
poverty and itinerates Add a missing verb
is in
whereas
they can't take Correct word choice
where
education
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an education
from
school, youngsters can contribute by giving tuition classes to poor kids, who not Change preposition
at
affords
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afford
the
education in school.
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an
On the other hand
, most Linking Words
of
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apply
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youngster
give free Add an article
the youngster
time
in playing games and Use synonyms
others
bad habits. They can utilize Correct quantifier usage
other
time
in Use synonyms
good
way Change the article
a good
whereas
they can give leisure Correct word choice
apply
time
for participating Use synonyms
as
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in
volunteer's
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volunteer
work
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such
as blood donation Linking Words
camp
, promoting education Fix the agreement mistake
camps
work
and Use synonyms
others type
of activities, they can gain knowledge from Fix the agreement mistake
other types
the
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apply
society
and get experience. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
work
would be useful for Use synonyms
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Add an article
the youngster
youngster
Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
for
Change preposition
in
their
future.
To sum up, unpaid Change the word
the
community
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work
will Use synonyms
be
Unnecessary verb
apply
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a benefit
benefit
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beneficial
for
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apply
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Add an article
the youngster
a youngster
youngster
, not for their experience but Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
also
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contribute
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to contribute
own
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to own
society
and Use synonyms
community
grow equally. Use synonyms
Hence
, I will support the Linking Words
community
's think that teenagers must get involved in Use synonyms
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society
Replace the word
social
Use synonyms
work
Correct word choice
and work
as
unpaid.Change preposition
apply
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