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Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so they can behave. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People hold widely divergent opinions on
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 as a vital part of growing up in
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. While some people argue that
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 should be taught how to behave at school, others disagree and claim that
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 should focus on their professions.
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 my point of view will be elaborated in
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. To commence with the
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 notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour.
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 of all, the
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 plays a vital role in child development, meaning that
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 in the grown-up process may know more critical situations in society from
teachers
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. To exemplify,
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 in modern society are so busy that they do not have enough time to teach their
children
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 how to deal with real-life situations, but lecturers are able to show them the right behaviour as they could communicate with
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everyday
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 in class.
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, pupils might learn social skills from
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 rather than comprehend
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incorrect information when
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 are not concerned enough with their
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. Moving towards the
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 point of
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teachers
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 should concentrate on
school
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the school
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 curriculum, which enormously influences the future of
students
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. It is obvious that the lecturers have much experience
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 their profession so they could help
students
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 comprehend extensive knowledge and develop their
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 more easily. Apart from it,
parents
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 at home may teach their
children
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 the basic skills to behave better in society, so the responsibility of
teachers
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 for
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’s behaviour will be reduced.
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,
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 could learn and practice
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human behaviours and social
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 observing their
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 at home or
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 public places. In conclusion, according to my perspective, I strongly believe that
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 play a pivotal role in the development of
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, so they must teach the principles and life ethics along with the regular courses.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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