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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some
people
 believe that teenagers should be required to volunteer in community activities in their free
time
. It helps them to improve their working experience, sympathy and benefit for the society as well. There are many non-profitable or charity organizations in the world and
also
 in Vietnam,
such
 as “Tro Ngheo Vung Cao” or “La
lanh
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land
 dum la rach” which help poverty children can go to school. Some other organizations collect food and clothes for
the
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poor
people
. With their help, many poor
people
 can have food, and warm clothes in winter and children can have
the
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 education. Those contributions to society are undeniable. To keep these kindness operations continue, those organizations
also
 need help from contributors who can donate money for charity or simply
work
 without paying in their free
time
. It is better for teenagers to improve their personal
skills
 when joining unpaid community
work
.
Such
 as collecting food and clothes, classifying them in
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suitable
ways
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, or teaching English to poor children, etc. The candidates need to ensure the
work
 is done on
time
. They need to manage the
time
 to complete their homework at school and the voluntary task as well. The voluntary
work
 might require them to communicate with many kinds of
people
 which help them improve their interpersonal skill. Sometimes they need to solve some problems arising suddenly.
In other words
, the volunteers need to have good communication,
time
 management and problem-solving
skills
. Those
skills
 will take an important part in their success in the future. In conclusion, joining in voluntary
work
 not only help teenagers improve their personal
skills
 but
also
 benefit the community as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • required
  • unpaid
  • community work
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • life skills
  • volunteering
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • socially aware
  • responsible
  • interact
  • diverse backgrounds
  • cultural understanding
  • tolerance
  • work experience
  • essential skills
  • employment
  • interests
  • passions
  • career development
  • contribute
  • betterment
  • development
  • local community
  • mental well-being
  • stress
  • self-esteem
  • burden
  • academic
  • personal lives
  • time management
  • support
  • balance
  • participate
  • encouraged
  • numerous benefits
  • individuals
  • conclusion
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