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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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no
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 doubt that nowadays
agricultural
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 industry has advanced magnificently. Despite
this
, a lot of nations worldwide are, yet, in hunger.
To begin
 with, the main reason for
this
 situation is that the majority of the population internationally are from
poor
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background
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.
In other words
, they can not afford food, education, and proper health care. A study by Jordan University,
for instance
, states that 75% of all people in Jordan are considered below the midclass line, which means, they are poor. Another reason,
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 to economical inflation, meals, vegetables, and meat prices rose incredibly.
As a result
, these items became unaffordable, leading to hungry people all over the planet. To overcome
this
 serious issue, not only the World Health Organization but
also
 the wealthier countries, must play a vital role in solving
this
 dilemma.
First
 and foremost, they should organize charity campaigns
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 those poor communities. By doing
this
, the raised money can help in providing a proper meal to a numerous number of families.
Secondly
, they must offer specialized educational training
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state-of-the-art machines in agriculture.
As a result
, more production with effective cost management,
subsequently
, cheaper products.
For instance
, an excessive training module
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 those in need would help them in earning money, while
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 the same time generating resources. To summarize, developed governments' positive role is required to overcome world hunger with the assistance of WHO as most of the time it is the poorer parts of the earth which severely suffer a shortage of food.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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