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Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea? Support your opinion with reasons and/or your personal experience.

In
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 a person gets in, the better experience he will acquire.
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, I am a staunch believer that both
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 have a salient
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 in helping
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 to gain interpersonal
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. In
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 explained. On the one hand, tertiary education has a paramount
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 in helping
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 with different aspects of their lives.
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, it helps
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 to obtain a plethora of information about different subjects leading to an increase in their interpersonal
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 that will help them with any hurdle they will struggle with.
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 can be exemplified by
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 in Egypt which help young learners to obtain soft
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. These
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 will help them to solve
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 as communication
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 and bullying
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.
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, what can be said is that the
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 of
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 and kindergartens can not be denied, as they help offspring to have a better life, and they help them to solve any dilemma.
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,
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 can help
children
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 to acquire more information about a certain obstacle they are struggling with. To clarify, if an offspring has some
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 with dealing with elder people, he can use some
books
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 that help him with
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 problem. A prominent example
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schools
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 in Egypt where some
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, which subject is mainly about relationships, are being taught at
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, and
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 helps the
children
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 to deal with the elder.
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, both
books
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 and
schools
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 have a salient
role
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 in teaching
children
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 how to overcome dilemmas in their lives. In conclusion, and after
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 in the learning process, but
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also
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 in
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 a process. It is recommended that interpersonal
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 curricula should be applied by governments in
schools
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • practical knowledge
  • problem-solving skills
  • adaptability
  • resilience
  • critical thinking
  • experiential learning
  • active participation
  • theoretical knowledge
  • personal growth
  • diverse perspectives
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