International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

It has been proven that

tourism

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is considered a key factor in

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development of host countries.

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the purses of

this

trade

are more than its minuses, authorities have to take many steps to conserve the local’s normal life.

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the

tourism

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has been recognized as a large source of income for countries all around the world. For more explanation, many

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indicate

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attractive industry makes up the biggest proportion of the national revenue.

In addition

, infrastructure changes to absorb tourists provide a

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numbers

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of job opportunities for local communities which

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lead to

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quality standard of living.

For example

, international hotels

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make suitable amenities facilities for guests from all corners of the world

decrease

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the rate of unemployment in one society. So, increased demand from

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can be a proper solution for

societies

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issues

such

as lack of

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and income.

Secondly

, tourists can leave

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influence on

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culture and customs of a community. To explain more, a large proportion of passengers do not

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adapt

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adopt

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themselves to new spaces

as a result

many conflicts and misunderstandings may happen between nations which make unpleasant situations.

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,

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trade

has been introduced as

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main factor of environmental degradation in tourist attraction places. In fact, it is undeniable that

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most of the visitors are not aware of the harmful consequences of their

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including air pollution, water pollution and the damage of historical buildings on host societies.

Therefore

, if specific proceedings are not taken by governments to preserve their international heritage, they will be destroyed. To conclude, there are quite a lot of advantages and disadvantages associated with

tourism

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industry,

however

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the

proses

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including economic improvement and providing job positions

overcome

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the cons which are environmental destruction and traditional disagreements by governments procedures to protect their community by increasing visitors’ knowledge and awareness.