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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

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At present, a large number of the population wants to be self-employed without working under others. According to the growing population of the world, it is very important to be a self-dependent person, though it
also
 has a risk of being bankrupted.
To begin
 with,
however
, the population of maximum countries is increasing very rapidly but the job sector is not developing compare to
this
. So, men are trying to stand on their own feet,
such
 as, in Bangladesh, many students after completing their graduation involve in agriculture by setting up their own fisheries or dairy firming. Apart from
this
, it
also
 makes employment for other public of
this
 area, which is
also
 very important for the economic development of a country.
Furthermore
, working in own fisheries or firm
also
 does not give the stress of being jobless as well as other pressure
such
 as time limit, target filling etc.
On the contrary
, in the case of setting
a
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up a
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firm, fisheries, businesses need a large fund which is
also
 very tough to manage.
Additionally
, after taking a big amount of bank loan, sometimes people become unable to pay
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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for
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apply
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the losses, which
also
make
Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
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 them bankrupt as well as
they
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apply
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lose their full property.
Moreover
, it
also
 can create
problem
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problems
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 in availability of the expert manpower for a company. In conclusion, in
a
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the
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 modern world, it is beneficial to become self-employed by accepting the risk and problems in
head
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your head
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, as well as,
be
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being
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 patient and strong to face new challenges.
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  • freedom
  • independence
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