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The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the Internet? What solutions can you suggest?

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The internet
is invent
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 most dangerous in the world
,
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 because tends to create
people
 with Many problems in the head , the
people
 think that the internet is a means of
connection
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 which facilitates possible connection situations, information and what can happen in the world. The internet is harmful to
children
 because
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 it brings vision problems because parents are increasingly giving their
children
 more benefits, without having growth or development, when they walk the streets
people
 are just crouched down looking at their cell phones or distracted, especially
children
 who at the age of 5 to 17 should be in constant socialization with other
people
 in In
this
 way, customs of the past times when
children
 were happy playing in the streets with more real dreams and being independent could be recovered.
Finally
, now times have changed,
people
 seek to adapt since they are
children
, they do not enjoy freedom, technological advances make it a risk worldwide every time due to the information that can be acquired,
people
 no longer spend time with the family, they search
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 happy through a reality that will never exist.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revolutionized
  • instantaneous communication
  • social media platforms
  • virtual meetings
  • e-commerce
  • global marketplaces
  • streaming services
  • online gaming
  • content creation
  • remote working
  • cyberbullying
  • internet addiction
  • access to information
  • professional development
  • privacy concerns
  • educational resources
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