You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some hlep. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explan why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Tim,
I hope you are well. I am writing
this
letter to you to request your help to find a part-time job.
I received the offer of
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from
University
of DOROTO Correct article usage
the University
last
week, and I am going to go there in
the end of Change the preposition
at
this
month. I am very excited.
You know, I like science when I was young, this
time I can get the offer of science
program, I feel very happy. Correct article usage
a science
This
is my first
time flight
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other country
, I am so Change the wording
another country
other countries
nervers
, but Correct your spelling
nervous
nerves
fortunetely
you are living there. Correct your spelling
fortunately
unfortunately
This
program is about biotechnology and Correct your spelling
focus
foucus
on Correct your spelling
focuses
clean
water Add an article
the clean
system
. When I finish my class I will back to my home town to help Fix the agreement mistake
systems
government
change local water resources.
The program cost me lots of money, so I have to find a part-time job Correct article usage
the government
during
two years to cover all the bills that I have to pay. I remember that you are working in a great company, could you please as a Change preposition
for
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reference
refrence
and help me to Correct your spelling
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apply
a part-time job. If you have other ideas, please connect with me.
Thank you for your help, I hope can Add the preposition
forapply
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receive
revive
reveive
your reply, see you soon.Correct your spelling
receive
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