You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some hlep. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explan why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Tim, I hope you are well. I am writing
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letter to you to request your help to find a part-time job. I received the offer
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University
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of DOROTO
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week, and I am going to go there
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the end of
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month. I am very excited. You know, I like science when I was young,
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time I can get the offer of
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program, I feel very happy.
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time
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to
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, I am so
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nervous
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, but
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you are living there.
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program is about biotechnology and
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focus
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focuses
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water
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. When I finish my class I will back to my home town to help
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change local water resources. The program cost me lots of money, so I have to find a part-time job
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two years to cover all the bills that I have to pay. I remember that you are working in a great company, could you please as a
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reference
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and help me to
apply
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a part-time job. If you have other ideas, please connect with me. Thank you for your help, I hope can
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receive
revive
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receive
your reply, see you soon.
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