Nowadays the crime rate among young people is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done by parents and teachers to reduce it?
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modern
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crime
is raised among the youth
. how can parents
and instructors help to reduce among society.
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This
this
should outline issues and give resolutions to reduce crime
.
To begin
with, crime
is increasing among younger people. firstly
, lack of awareness
among the youth
about laws and regulations
. In other words
, young people do not knowledge about their law
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laws
regulations
. For instance
, half of the youth
, do not know about punishment through law
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laws
regulations
.To sort it out, Government should arrange free programs to give awareness
about the laws and regulations
of their country.,also
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a knowledge programs
in secondary schools to give Correct the article-noun agreement
knowledge programs
a knowledge program
awareness
about our law
.
Furthermore
, I would like to highlight the major impact of the crime
rate increasing day by day. secondly
, parents
provide them with all the facilities
and luxuries an
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it
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which
crime
is raised among their youth
. In other words
, some parents
give cars and weapons to children to flex in front of their friends.For example
, My cousin lives in Canada, so his parents
provide them with all the luxuries in his, but he is doing misuse and breaking all the law
of their country. recently he just killed one man on the road with a weapon.To figure it Fix the agreement mistake
laws
,
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out, parents
parents
should not provide all the facilities
to their children in their teenage age because it cause
harm to society.
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causes
Lastly
, the crime
rate frequently increases among teenagers. it is caused because of several reasons such
as Lack of awareness
and providing more facilities
to children. ,also
give some suggestion
that Government arrange the program to give Fix the agreement mistake
suggestions
awareness
about law
and Correct article usage
the law
parents
should not provide all the facilities
to their kids.Submitted by aahil922 on
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