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In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this rule of accommodation have some advantages or disadvantages?

#cities #people #apartment #blocks #rule #accommodation
In present days, we can see that
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majority
majorty
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majority
 of the population in
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urban areas are preferring to settle
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up
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in apartments.
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 is quite
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readily
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rapidly
 increasing. I would like to point out
advantages
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, disadvantages and
also
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, I would like to pinpoint the advantages of those living in apartments. If you ever want to buy an individual residence in
city
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center
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 or prime area, it will end up costing 4 to 10 times higher than
to buy
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 a flat. So,
this
 price difference is the key factor to many for opting
apartment
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apartments
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.
One
 will have easy access to many other localities eg: offices, shopping if we tend to live in the cities prime area. We can see many
apartment
 societies provide all the amenities which are required for daily life where it can be gym,
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children's
childrens
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 play zone and elders club.
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, if we look at the disadvantages. We will feel
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 with the issue
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 our privacy and
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 to do things which we could do
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in our individual
home
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. We need to pay
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maintenance
maintance
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maintenance
amount
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 for each month which could be
annonying
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annoying
 and
also
apartment's
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 society rules will make your life miserable,
where
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it
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will
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 restrict you from doing many things as you wish. If
apartment
 culture goes on in
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 years, those cities with large
population
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populations
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 tend to become concrete
jungle
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 to live in. In my opinion,it's a
condracting
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contracting
 statement.
One
 can't give out conclusion in favour of
one
 side, I believe that it's a choice of an individual to choose where they want to live in
apartment
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 based on their prerequisites and
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lifestyle
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life style
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 or they can choose to stay anywhere in the city. To conclude, people who have financial freedom and power parity of buying a house in
most
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 prominent residential area,
they
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should avoid going for apartments
orelse
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or else
else
one
 doesn't have the privilege to that can opt for
apartment
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 where
he
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 can feel secure and
easy
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 access
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schools and offices to their family.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • large apartment blocks
  • affordable
  • amenities
  • facilities
  • sense of community
  • security
  • public transportation
  • maintenance responsibilities
  • social interaction
  • networking
  • urban lifestyle
  • proximity
  • attractions
  • privacy
  • personal space
  • noise
  • disturbances
  • neighbors
  • outdoor space
  • green areas
  • cramped living conditions
  • dependency
  • management
  • regulations
  • parking spaces
  • individuality
  • customization
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