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many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, wich causes many health problems. sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. do you agree or diagree?

#food #drink #products #levels #sugar #wich #health #people #diagree
it is said that
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 most of the produced food and drink have high grades of sugar. so, it causes many illnesses in humans. the cost of
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sweet products should be increased to persuade costumers to eat less sugar.
i
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 agree strongly with
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large
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 extent due to
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 of global obesity and getting various types of
disease
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. some
people
 believe that
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 not only do sugary foods have advantages
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people
, but
also
 help them to increase their blood pressure and enhance their brain workout.
however
,
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 refuse to think that
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science
since
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science
,
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should be consumed sparingly to not only have
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 beneficial aspects on its own, but
also
 you can make sure about your
body
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 health too.
for instance
,
people
 should use cookies once a week. so after a while, they
dont
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don't
 need more sugary things. another reason is that, if
people
 continue to consume these sorts of products, they will gain weight. so, in
next
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 decades, we will face
this
 issue of
excussive
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excessive
 obesity in the world.
for example
,
people
 will not able to accomplish their daily work as
easy
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 as ordinary
people
 do.
in addition
, it causes negative impacts on heart function.
also
, diabetic diseases are included. if
people
 get sick through excessive usage of
unhaelthy
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unhealthy
 meals , they have to spend
lot
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 of money to cure
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themselves
themselfs
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themselves
. often, they
forced
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 to buy expensive medicines. so , it can be a problematic situation for them. to conclude, if you eat healthy foods and drinks, you will have
longer
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 life span and you are able to be in shape during your life.
also
, it is important to be aware of the percentage of fat in the food
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wich
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 you consume.
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