You work in a shop and have noticed that many customers complain that the shop closes too early. You think that the shop should stay open until later. Write a letter to the shop manager, in your letter 1. Describe the complaints that have been made 2. Explain why it is important that the shop should stay open until later 3. suggest how the opening hours should be changed Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear_________________,

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Smith, I am writing to communicate some details about shop development and events, that if you want, we can modify through time, begin when you decide. From my perspective, the schedule in Caribean Flowers is not enough for the audience, because I received some feedback in the few days about the earlier shop close, certainly, the people end their work at 6:00 pm and,

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we end the service at 5:00 pm,

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, many constituencies can not get before the closing date, I suggest extending the work time at least 7:00 pm

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We can offer more possibilities to the public. In terms of productivity, I am sure the changes are improving your income and growing the current clients, ensuring our sales and making some good general advertising in the neighborhood. In summary, the open and close time that I want to implement is: 1. Week Days - Monday to Friday: 7:00 am to 7:00 pm. 2. Weekends - Saturday 9:00 am to 7:00 pm. Sunday 11:00 am to 2:00 pm. As far I can tell, that schedule is the best way to attend to most clients and give them all the excellent service whatever we offer. Yours sincerely, Eduardo