Write a letter to friend to inform them of a celebration you are having for a recent job promotion. Include information about The promotion The celebration Their accomodation

Dear Lily, I am writing to share some more information about the party organised by my work company. Just like I have told you before, you are invited and I am hoping, you are going to come,
therefore
, we will be able to celebrate together. As you know, I have been working in the beauty centre for 4 years now and my boss had offered me a manager position. I really enjoy my job, so I agreed
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that. In order to
this
huge change in my career, my coworkers are throwing a party in a fancy restaurant on 45 Bridge Avenue in Ottawa. We are going to have a luxury dinner, which includes appetizers, a main dish and a dessert. After
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we can use the dancefloor to dance the whole night. You
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do not have to worry about the accommodation. There are hotel rooms that were reserved for our guests at
Hilton's
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. I believe, I included all of the major information above. If you have any
further
questions, please contact me. I am looking forward to
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some quality time with you again. Take care, Paula
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