Write a letter to friend to inform them of a celebration you are having for a recent job promotion. Include information about The promotion The celebration Their accomodation

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Dear John, How are you? I hope my letter finds you in good health. It's been ages since we had a party together. Do you remember

last

we when met I told you about my chances of getting promoted to the post of senior administrator by the end of

this

year? So here it is. I'm writing

this

letter to let you know about a party I'm holding at my house in California to celebrate my promotion. I have invited all our school and college friends that I could get my hands on. But only special friends like you are invited with their entire family. So, do bring your wife and children. My family will hold their company. I've arranged the caterers and decided on the theme for the party. Hopefully, everything will be perfect. Once you come here, you do not need to worry about the accommodation. Everything is on me. For friends who arrive with their families, I have booked a few rooms in a motel close to my place. The other day, I will

also

show you places around. I cannot wait to meet you all. See you all. Anna.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

193 words

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The Closing

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