Some people say that it is impossible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that both economically successful and keeping the

environment

free of pollution is an impossibility for a country.

Although

it has been justified in real life, I still disagree with

this

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in

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an

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extent. In the process of developing the industrial economy and other industries, a country has to use a lot of resources

such

as coal, wood,

oil

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and oil

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, ...

this

leads to environmental pollution and affects people a lot. people.

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, between 2000 to 2018, roughly 75.5

percent

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of China's CO2 emissions – which is more than those from all European, African, and Latin American

countries

combined, an additional 14

percent

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of its CO2 emissions come from oil, all of

this

lead to the fact that river, air

are

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heavily tarnished. The main reason for

this

problem is that most other

countries

cannot think of a way to deal with industrial wastes after the work is done

,

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so

that

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in order to develop a strong country, the

environment

will

also

be contaminated by that development.

On the other hand

, there are

countries

that have done very well in balancing both factors of national development and environmental protection very well. Governments consider protecting the

environment

as a task in developing economic-social policy, while at the same time they

also

use measures to deal with the problem very effectively,

such

as: using renewable energy or putting in place laws to prevent acts of polluting the

environment

,...

For example

, Singapore is one of the most environmentally clean in the world but still achieves economic growth. They make use of friendly power to the

environment

.

In addition

, they have modern economics and become a famous tourist location

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attract

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lots of people. In conclusion, I think

although

it is difficult to achieve economically

successful

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while keeping the

environment

clean is difficult but not impossible and I believe that developing

countries

and developed

countries

can solve

this

problem.