Some people say that it is impossible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that both economically successful and keeping the
environment
free of pollution is an impossibility for a country. Use synonyms
Although
it has been justified in real life, I still disagree with Linking Words
this
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to in
in
extent.
In the process of developing the industrial economy and other industries, a country has to use a lot of resources Correct your spelling
an
such
as coal, wood, Linking Words
oil
, ... Correct word choice
and oil
this
leads to environmental pollution and affects people a lot. people. Linking Words
For example
, between 2000 to 2018, roughly 75.5 Linking Words
percent
of China's CO2 emissions – which is more than those from all European, African, and Latin American Change the spelling
per cent
countries
combined, an additional 14 Use synonyms
percent
of its CO2 emissions come from oil, all of Change the spelling
per cent
this
lead to the fact that river, air Linking Words
are
heavily tarnished. The main reason for Change the verb form
is
this
problem is that most other Linking Words
countries
cannot think of a way to deal with industrial wastes after the work is doneUse synonyms
,
so Remove the comma
apply
that
in order to develop a strong country, the Correct word choice
apply
environment
will Use synonyms
also
be contaminated by that development.
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On the other hand
, there are Linking Words
countries
that have done very well in balancing both factors of national development and environmental protection very well. Governments consider protecting the Use synonyms
environment
as a task in developing economic-social policy, while at the same time they Use synonyms
also
use measures to deal with the problem very effectively, Linking Words
such
as: using renewable energy or putting in place laws to prevent acts of polluting the Linking Words
environment
,... Use synonyms
For example
, Singapore is one of the most environmentally clean in the world but still achieves economic growth. They make use of friendly power to the Linking Words
environment
. Use synonyms
In addition
, they have modern economics and become a famous tourist location Linking Words
Correct pronoun usage
that attract
attract
lots of people.
In conclusion, I think Correct subject-verb agreement
attracts
although
it is difficult to achieve economically Linking Words
successful
while keeping the Replace the word
success
environment
clean is difficult but not impossible and I believe that developing Use synonyms
countries
and developed Use synonyms
countries
can solve Use synonyms
this
problem.Linking Words
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