Some peopl believe that after a child enters school their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extend do you agree or disagree It

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children

when they grow. Definitely, the closest party is their

parents

,

however

, some people state that

teachers

have more power to influence

kids

once they got into

schools

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. I tend to agree with

this

idea from mainly two views; one view is from their effect to guide

school

students

' future life plans,

such

as, which universities to go to or what kind of jobs they can pursue. The

second

view is from the breadth of their knowledge in the area

children

are most interested in. A good teacher can support young people to deepen their learning which

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their core competency throughout their lives. The

first

positive impact

school

tutors can give young

students

is the approach to

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their life plans. Of course,

parents

can

also

take

this

role but sometimes their expectations

to

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their own

children

blunders

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the

parents

' right decisions.

On the contrary

, professional educators can give their followers more neutral and unbiased

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guidance

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guidances

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.

For instance

, educators can probe

children

what

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they want to be when they are grown up and offer

supports

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to choose good higher

educations

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education

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or suitable training institutions to realize the

kids

' dreams. The

second

significant impact

from

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teachers

at

school

is their level of knowledge.

For example

, those young

students

who like to study astronomy can get abundant teaching from

school

tutors.

Additionally

, the tutors can introduce plenty of learning resources on top of their tutorials which may attract the

kids

to study more.

This

kind of influence is difficult to

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made only by

parents

. In conclusion, I agree that good

teachers

can influence their pupils more than

what

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their

parents

can

do

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. They can guide their class

how

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to

chose

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their future as well as to attract the

students

by

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their deep knowledge of subjects matter which

kids

are most

wanting

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to learn.

This

can be all the more

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reason

reasoon

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reason

that people want their

kids

to enter a

school

with

best

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teachers

.