In many developing countries , there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction . What measures could be taken to prevent this ?

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countries have faced the
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of
air
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and
water
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pollution
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.
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treatment
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facilities at all
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. The foremost
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caused by
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quality of
air
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and
water
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is created by people, taking the form of emissions from
factories
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. It happens because toxic materials and gasses are burned and released into the atmosphere, and in the same way
factories
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release pollutants directly into rivers.These activities are
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an illnesses
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illnesses
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in the nation.
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CNN report recently 40% of people have
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health
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caused by
air
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and
water
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pollution
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which leads to
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illnesses
ilnesses
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illnesses
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as pneumonia, bronchial asthma and skin diseases. Some of these illnesses led to
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of 3% population in 2018.
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possible solution
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this
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problem
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would be to take the situation with emissions of harmful substances into the atmosphere and
water
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under
control
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of the
government
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. The
government
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should push the
factories
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to have
a treatment plants
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treatment plants
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, which could help to avoid the problems with
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water
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pollution
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. For
air
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pollution
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decision
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the
government
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should push the
companies
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perform
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regular environmental impact assessments to identify potential harmful impacts their waste may have on the natural ecosystem. If
factories
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will not follow these rules, the
government
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should impose
a high penalties
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.
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of Norway has already imposed
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system of
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full control by
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highpenalty
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fee
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for
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who make
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harm the environment. And
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system is work
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because Norway
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of the countries
with
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a
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with the least
water
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and
air
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pollution
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. If
the
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developing countries will follow the same system, the
problem
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of
air
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and
water
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pollution
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will reduce. To conclude,
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problem
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the problem
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of
air
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and
water
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pollution
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leads to serious problems
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as health
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problem
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problems
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. The most effective solution is
push
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the
factories
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to have
a treatment plants
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a treatment plant
treatment plants
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and to carry out additional activities by environmental assessment
companies
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. If
companies
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will not follow these rules impose
the
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high penalties.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution control regulations
  • emissions
  • discharges
  • green technology incentives
  • environmentally friendly practices
  • renewable energy sources
  • sustainable materials
  • waste management policies
  • recycling processes
  • environmental monitoring
  • compliance with environmental standards
  • public awareness campaigns
  • environmental protection
  • infrastructure upgrades
  • modern building techniques
  • international environmental organizations
  • air and water quality management
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