In many developing countries , there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction . What measures could be taken to prevent this ?

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many

third world

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countries have faced the

problem

of

air

and

water

pollution

.

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firstly

will suggest that the biggest

problem

of

this

phenomenon is improper waste disposal in production and

then

submit to

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treatment

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facilities at all

factories

. The foremost

problem

caused by

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quality of

air

and

water

is created by people, taking the form of emissions from

factories

. It happens because toxic materials and gasses are burned and released into the atmosphere, and in the same way

factories

release pollutants directly into rivers.These activities are

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an illnesses

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in the nation.

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CNN report recently 40% of people have

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health

problem

caused by

air

and

water

pollution

which leads to

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illnesses

ilnesses

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illnesses

such

as pneumonia, bronchial asthma and skin diseases. Some of these illnesses led to

death

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of 3% population in 2018.

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possible solution

of

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this

problem

would be to take the situation with emissions of harmful substances into the atmosphere and

water

under

control

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of the

government

. The

government

should push the

factories

to have

a treatment plants

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treatment plants

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, which could help to avoid the problems with

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water

pollution

. For

air

pollution

decision

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the

government

should push the

companies

perform

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regular environmental impact assessments to identify potential harmful impacts their waste may have on the natural ecosystem. If

factories

will not follow these rules, the

government

should impose

a high penalties

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high penalties

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.

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, the

government

of Norway has already imposed

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system of

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full control by

factories

,

furthermore

impose

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highpenalty

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high penalty

fee

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for

companies

who make

a

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harm the environment. And

this

system is work

,

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because Norway

one

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of the countries

with

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a

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with the least

water

and

air

pollution

. If

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developing countries will follow the same system, the

problem

of

air

and

water

pollution

will reduce. To conclude,

problem

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the problem

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of

air

and

water

pollution

leads to serious problems

such

as health

problem

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problems

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. The most effective solution is

push

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the

factories

to have

a treatment plants

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a treatment plant

treatment plants

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and to carry out additional activities by environmental assessment

companies

. If

companies

will not follow these rules impose

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high penalties.