Some people think the best way to improve road safety is to increase minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of

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I don't agree with that,

Although

raising the minimum

age

for

drivers

can make

drivers

mature.Some people think that older people have more maturity and judgment than teenagers.So they think they can better deal with unexpected situations on the road.In order to reduce the occurrence of

accidents

.But these arguments have the following flaws.because

this

is not the case.

Firstly

,The opinion did not give a clear

age

limit.If older people have better judgment and control than teenagers, how much older? How do you decide

this

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question?But 18, 22 or 25,

such

age

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argument is not argumentative.So how old is an appropriate

age

to raise? In the

second

. There is no direct relationship between the occurrence of

traffic

accidents

and

age

.Driving a motor vehicle is a technical job in itself.What needs to be tested is a driver's experience and operation proficiency and improvisation ability and attitude and so on.It's definitely not

age

.There is

also

an old Chinese saying that ambition does not mean high

age

.

Instead

, a young but experienced driver with good agility. Compared to older, inexperienced

drivers

. It may be better to avoid

traffic

accidents

. The

third

point. Not all

traffic

accidents

are caused by motor vehicles.At the same time, some measures are needed to maintain road safety.

For example

, we can divide the roads between motor vehicles and non-motor vehicles to reduce the contact between them and

thus

reduce the

traffic

accident

rateImprove

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rate improve

public transport safety education for pedestrians and

drivers

.To reduce jaywalking and red light running.Encourage citizens to obey the rules of public transport.

Therefore

, in my opinion, the above views lack objectivity and should be discussed through comprehensive reasons.