Some people think the best way to improve road safety is to increase minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I don't agree with that,

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raising the minimum

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for

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can make

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mature.Some people think that older people have more maturity and judgment than teenagers.So they think they can better deal with unexpected situations on the road.In order to reduce the occurrence of

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.But these arguments have the following flaws.because

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is not the case.

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,The opinion did not give a clear

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limit.If older people have better judgment and control than teenagers, how much older? How do you decide

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question?But 18, 22 or 25,

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argument is not argumentative.So how old is an appropriate

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to raise? In the

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. There is no direct relationship between the occurrence of

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accidents

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and

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.Driving a motor vehicle is a technical job in itself.What needs to be tested is a driver's experience and operation proficiency and improvisation ability and attitude and so on.It's definitely not

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an old Chinese saying that ambition does not mean high

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, a young but experienced driver with good agility. Compared to older, inexperienced

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. It may be better to avoid

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point. Not all

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accidents

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are caused by motor vehicles.At the same time, some measures are needed to maintain road safety.

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, we can divide the roads between motor vehicles and non-motor vehicles to reduce the contact between them and

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reduce the

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accident

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public transport safety education for pedestrians and

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.To reduce jaywalking and red light running.Encourage citizens to obey the rules of public transport.

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, in my opinion, the above views lack objectivity and should be discussed through comprehensive reasons.