You recently took a trip. In your absence, a friend did you a big favour. Write a letter thanking them. In your letter inclue. 1-What the favour was 2-How this favour helped you 3-An offer of compensation

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Dear Sabby I would like to express my thanks for taking care of my dog while I was away

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a business trip to Bangalore. It was a sudden team meet organised by the Bangalore team to prepare for a client meet and if you have not been there

then

it would have been very difficult for me to leave my dog to the crutch.

Snoppy

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Snoopy

my pup was really in a good shape and was really happy when I saw

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, due to his old age I would have not preferred leaving him in some dog care, was not sure whether he would have eaten anything or was active like other days after meeting so many strange dogs

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, I hope he didn’t bother you much. I owe you a dinner of your choice whenever you are free and can have some gala time together.

Snoppy

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Snoopy

really misses you, would request you to come

some day

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tea and meet him. I bought some traditional sweets from Bangalore,

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to you soon. Yours Truly Gritika

Submitted by mailtoritika.chandwani on Tue Nov 08 2022

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

179 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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