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Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly nagetive impact on local inhabitants and the environment, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

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Tourism
 is becoming an important part of the lifestyle.It has increased in the
last
 decades.There are both good and bad impacts of
tourism
.Here I will discuss the advantages as well as the disadvantages of
tourism
. Social media is playing a vital role in everyone's life and that became the most impacting part of
tourism
.There are social media influencers or vloggers, and
People
 do follow them.Because of that followers get more information about many
places
 by sitting at home as vloggers provide detailed information about particular
places
 or hotels which creates created interest in going to that particular place. Nowadays we are having many online hotel booking applications which give lots of discounts
also
.
People
 can sit at home and plan international trips with one click.Travelling keeps pupils happy and energetic.During , the pandemic all travel was banned all over overseas but now it has been opened and a number of pupils travelling and visiting their dream
places
 which is a good profit for the government in an economical way.
Tourism
 plays a crucial role in a part of the economy. On the other ,hand travelling impacts nature in a bad way. While travelling tourists use stuff like" use and throw " and they do not vanish in a particular way but they throw their waste anywhere. In our ,country
people
 visit historical
places
 for parties and keep waste as it is.
People
 should understand the meaning of historical
places
 or tourist
places
. They should carry their garbage with them and throw that in dustbins which will keep those
places
 clean and beautiful.
Also
Add a comma
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 a number of pupils don't understand the meaning of drinking water they use that for cleaning or any other stuff which is a waste of water and which leads to a shortage in summer.Fort is the best example for
this
 explanation. In my opinion,
this
tourism
 includes both advantages as well as disadvantages.
People
 should think and act wisely which will give them more advantages.
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