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The best way to solve world’s traffic and environmental problems is increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion?

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Some
people
 argue that the most efficient way to protect the world from huge
traffic
 and issues associated with the environment is to rise the
fuel
 cost. In my view, it is not the best way to solve those problems.
First
, raising
fuel
 prices does not directly affect
people
's choice of
transportation
. A couple of years ago, researchers at the University of Edinburgh made research and published a report which clearly stated that there was no relationship between
fuel
 cost and which
transportation
people
 take.
This
 is because
people
 who go to the office still need to travel whatever the
fuel
 price is.
Hence
, raising
fuel
 prices does not have a significant impact on easing
traffic
 and calming down environmental issues. In the meantime, it is undeniable that
traffic
 has a significant impact on the environment due to the emission of carbon dioxide. An expert at UCLA proved that if a quarter of
people
 in the world shift their daily mode of
transportation
 from car to bicycle, at least 5 million of carbon dioxide can be removed from the air, and there will be no
traffic
 jams
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 globally.
Hence
,
such
 measures which promote
people
 to ride bicycles make a huge impact to protect the earth and ease
traffic
. Overall, it is true that the environment and
traffic
 have been two significant issues that we have in
this
 century. To tackle
with
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this
 issue, I believe it is important to encourage
people
 to take bicycles more than taking
a
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public
transportation
such
 as trains.
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