Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

While

some people think the best method to be happy in life is to have

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money

causes

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of spending a lot of time on a job, others the public and experts believe

this

topic is not true. Let me discuss my opinion in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, I should say that since the citizens have different views and opinions towards each other, there has always been disagreement on the matter. Some citizens think if they spend a lot of time

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coins they have better lives because they think money helps them to

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well and

also

they can buy many things.

For instance

, a big house or a perfect car or fashionable clothes or even they will buy a private aeroplane.

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, they

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guess

can progress at a job.

As a result

, they prefer to stay at work

instead

of leaving there to take a rest or have leisure activities and suppose it has more advantages for them.

On the other hand

, if I want to talk about the mindset and beliefs of the second category, I have to say that they think it is not true and the experts think humans need to own enough time to take a rest and the folk must own a regular plan for work and hobby in during the life.

For example

, when people spend adequate hours for leisure and

hobby

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hobbies

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such

as

,

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playing games or doing exercise

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hanging out with their friends or even going travelling or camping, they can

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a nice life and

this

subject is vital for everyone.

However

, going to work is completely essential for everyone. In conclusion, In my ,view the government should grow

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the families' culture and the best way is to trust the experts so I completely agree with them that

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subject

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more disadvantages .