You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

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Madam, I am writing

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letter to you to complain about the bad service that I met two weeks ago. I am a student who

study

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studies

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ABC

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University.

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month I rent an apartment, but the owner asked me to pay the rental fee by cheque. I went to your bank which is located in 123 street two weeks ago. The counter whose name is Jack,

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apply

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was so surprised when he heard my request. He told me if I need a new chequebook, I have to wait three days.

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he turned his face to talk to his workmate. I wrote my information of address to him

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I left the bank. Since that day, I have been waiting for two weeks but I didn’t receive anything. I am so angry because I have to pay the rental fee right now. I think maybe Jack didn’t send the

checkbook

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chequebook

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book to me. I am very disappointed with his service. I suggest you help me to check my issue and send the chequebook to me as soon as possible.

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, I need Jack to make

an apologies

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an apology

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to me. I am looking forward to

receive

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your response, thank you! Yours faithfully, Kevin

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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205 words

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