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Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The role of play in the reduction of anxiety and pain and in the improvement of behaviours and overall
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 in children in the field of nursing care in hospital settings. The role of play in the reduction of anxiety and pain and in the improvement of behaviours and overall
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 in children in the field of nursing care in hospital settings. Eligibility criteria Studies published during the period 2014–2019 including original articles in English, Spanish and Portuguese. Databases consulted: SCOPUS, MEDLINE/PubMed, WoS, and CUIDEN (Nursing database in Spanish). Sample Seventeen relevant records were selected. After critical reading using the CASPe (Critical Appraisal Skills Programme in Spanish) instrument, 7 articles were rejected and 10 were
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 studies showed significant evidence for the role of therapeutic play in the reduction of anxiety and pain and in the overall
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 of paediatric patients
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