You have been assigned to give a networking presentation with your colleague from a different office, who you met last year. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter: • Inform your colleague that you will be working together. • Provide your initial ideas on the networking presentation. • Ask for a time to meet and practice the presentation.

Dear Mr Yang, I am writing to inform you that we are candidates to proceed with a new project related to a networking
presentation
. I will cooperate with you in our sales department and my position is a financial advisor which is proficient in insurance and mutual funds. As I know, you are a new sales representative in our section, so both of us oblige to propose great initiatives regarding
this
presentation
. I would like to organize all colleagues' personal contact information on the
last
page of the
presentation
and
also
summarize some main points in the
first
agenda.
Furthermore
, the following content will concentrate on each worker's particular assigned duty, so audiences could have a general idea of everyone's speciality. I wonder whether you are available on Tuesday afternoon so we could rehearse
this
presentation
together.
Moreover
, I will reserve a small meeting conference and
also
borrow a projector so as to output the
presentation
in terms of confirming the details of the
presentation
. Please reply to me with your confirmed time regarding the
presentation
rehearsal, and hope we can have a successful delivery. Yours faithfully, Claire Chen
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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