In some countries, small town-center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
In recent years,more and more
people
seeks
Change the verb form
seek
to
life quality.Some smaller shops would face Change preposition
apply
bankrupt
in Replace the word
bankruptcy
local
town area.Increasing Add an article
the local
people
likes
to Change the verb form
like
driving
vehicles to Wrong verb form
drive
the
far place Correct article usage
apply
then
buy stuff.I consider this
event is harm
more than Replace the word
harmful
profit
.So Replace the word
profitable
i
will analyze Change the capitalization
I
this
problem in residents and the government of city
.
Add an article
the city
Firstly
,people
likes
to Change the verb form
like
driving
car and purchase goods in faraway locations.It might Wrong verb form
drive
caused
a lot of cars emission.These exhausts are definitely harmful to human bodies.Plus even the Change the verb form
cause
be caused
town
air condition would Change noun form
town's
got
worse.It is Change the verb form
get
be got
bad
impact Add an article
the bad
a bad
for
the Change preposition
on
earth
environment.If citizens realized Change noun form
earth's
mistakes
and decrease drive times.The environment will be better than before.Correct pronoun usage
their mistakes
Furthermore
,young people
have to buy a new car if small urban center
stores were Change the spelling
centre
canceled
.Those Change the spelling
cancelled
people
will face to amounts
of economic pressures.Meanwhile,They Fix the agreement mistake
amount
also
have to spend lots of times
Fix the agreement mistake
time
for
buying something.Not only cost them too much money but Change preposition
apply
also
consume people
more energy.The elder people
also
needs
to solve plenty of difficulties.Because They can’t drive and do not live with their children.Change the verb form
need
Besides
,no more supermarkets are close to older people
.And this
group of older people
will cause the most harmful
for the benefit.
Replace the word
harm
Secondly
,Local town-center
shops Change the spelling
town-centre
are disappear
step by step.Change the verb form
are disappearing
This
situation lead
to urban commercial trade data Wrong verb form
led
are
going down.It may cause Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct article usage
the city
city
economic degree is Change noun form
city's
decline
.Living markets occupy Correct your spelling
declined
major
economic in Correct article usage
a major
city
after all.Add an article
the city
For example
,people
living in Beijing China which is a city
rapidly development
.These Replace the word
developing
people
are capable of easily find
more than two or three supermarkets around them.Wrong verb form
finding
Moreover
,with the development of the
vehicle numbers raising in Correct article usage
apply
this
city
.People
are likely to create sorts of accidents.Such
as:broke
down、Wrong verb form
breaking
hits
some Replace the word
hitting
people
or mammals、fuel explosion.Plus every year a large number of peoples
Fix the agreement mistake
people
was die
or Change the verb form
was died
was dying
injury
in Replace the word
injured
the
vehicle accidents.These problems are not good for the government and residents.If not have Correct article usage
apply
much
cars maybe Change the quantifier
many
city
would be comfortable and peaceful.Correct article usage
the city
For instance
,common
rural has fewer cars than Correct article usage
the common
urban
,plus has Correct article usage
the urban
much
larger area.And Add an article
a much
urban
Add an article
the urban
city
of high density
vehicles Add a hyphen
high-density
have
more accidents than Change the verb form
has
the
Correct article usage
apply
rural
.
In conclusion,Correct pronoun usage
onesrural
i
will stand on my view that Change the capitalization
I
this
phenomenon more harms than interests
.It is not only adverse for Fix the agreement mistake
interest
people
of different stages,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
has more hurt in the government and city
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