In some countries, small town-center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

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life quality.Some smaller shops would face

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car and purchase goods in faraway locations.It might

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a lot of cars emission.These exhausts are definitely harmful to human bodies.Plus even the

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worse.It is

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environment.If citizens realized

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and decrease drive times.The environment will be better than before.

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have to buy a new car if small urban

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stores were

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will face to

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buying something.Not only cost them too much money but

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consume

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more energy.The elder

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also

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to solve plenty of difficulties.Because They can’t drive and do not live with their children.

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for the benefit.

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going down.It may cause

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economic degree is

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economic in

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after all.

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living in Beijing China which is a

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are capable of easily

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more than two or three supermarkets around them.

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are likely to create sorts of accidents.

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vehicle accidents.These problems are not good for the government and residents.If not have

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cars maybe

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would be comfortable and peaceful.

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rural has fewer cars than

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larger area.And

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phenomenon more harms than

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.It is not only adverse for

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has more hurt in the government and

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