Research shows that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people engage in unhealthy activities. What is the cause of this? What can be done?

Nowadays, many
people
are doing unhealthy
activities
and eating
junk
food
because they are not good for our
health
or for their fit body I think they can do
activities
for their bodies and do exercise and yoga to maintain their body and they can become fit and fine but they can eat
junk
food
and obese
day
by
day
I will discuss the causes solutions of the essay in the paragraph.
To begin
with, most
people
are eaten
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junk
food
like pizza,
burger
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burgers
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, pasta, etc.but these are not good for their
health
.because
junk
food
is like poison for their
health
we can eat good
food
then
they can fit.
Hence
, most
of
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the
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people
even
then
young children are
also
obese
day
by
day
. Because they can eat
junk
food
and do unhealthy
activities
.when we can take more exercise, running and yoga
also
to take fit our body. For epitome-many children are losing their future to
eat
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unhealthy
food
and sleep.
Secondly
, most
people
and even
then
the minors used mobile
phones
which can
also
be unhealthy for her. Most
people
are using mobile
phones
for only their work like google information, assignments etc. But most commonly
people
are using mobile
phones
for social apps like
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
Whatsapp
, Instagram, telegram etc. They can lose her future and they lose her eyes because phone brightness
are
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affected her eyes. And can't good her
health
. I think we can use mobile
phones
for only
main
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the main
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purposes and use them well.
for example
- many youngsters have used mobile
phones
for gaming and they can play
day
and night
this
is not useful for their haleness. In conclusion, the possible reasons are we can eat
junk
food
so we can need more exercise and yoga for our
health
and use our mobile
phones
only for emergencies and important work so we can fit and healthy and do unhealthy
activities
so, we can sick and
this
is very hazardous for her
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