You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

Dear Sir, I write in reference to my company’s annual meeting which took place in your hotel, Holiday Inn, on
last
Monday. I booked into your hotel due to the amazing reviews I read online. All the participants of the meeting liked the well-arranged seating area in the lounge, its theme and its lighting. The food was
also
served on time,
moreover
, all the workers have been a great help to us.
However
, the meal which was served was not warm enough, and it was served cold.
Furthermore
, cutlery was limited due to
this
,people had to call waiters to bring them what they needed. The lunch was haphazard. I regret to say that I am not completely satisfied with your service. I would suggest that you could be careful about
this
next
time, or you can
also
install small burners beneath every food bowl to keep them warm.
Additionally
, you must supervise your kitchen workers effectively to avoid
this
in future. I would appreciate it if you could look into
this
matter at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Leo
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Compliments
  • Ambiance
  • Professionalism
  • Hospitality
  • Quality
  • Variety
  • Freshness
  • Catering
  • Menu options
  • Dietary requirements
  • Feedback
  • Survey
  • Collaboration
  • Improvements
  • Rectify
  • Gastronomy
  • Culinary
  • Hospitality industry
  • Client satisfaction
  • Constructive criticism
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