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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

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No one can deny that in
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 a large number of foods that were purchased from stores and restaurants. I think people
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 meals because they do not know the value of the diet, there are a few solutions to avoid the destruction of
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 as donate the poor community with the contribution of governments I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
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 with, These days people prefer to buy
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 more than their needs because they earn valuable money from their work when they compete their lunch they will not give their
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food
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 to poor children
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 they will throw it in the garbage.
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, The low-grade society has no
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 to eat because their national economy will decline, their authority will not support them and they will die every day without the nutrition they request help from the international level.
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, In the USA, the news reveals headlines that a huge factor of poor nations will require a fund to bring
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 and they will be taking loans from developed countries.
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, When the rich regions will support unrich nations their community will be joyful and it has a consequence on development and
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 solution will be doing good effect all over the globe.
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, In Germany, The local citizens will plan to provide income to neighbourliness and they will bring funds and give to charities and which has a good impact on
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 development and the dung
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 problem will stop helping
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 trend. In conclusion, It is not good to
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 because it will be disrespectful
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 and
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 effect will destroy the new generation's future it is an essential part of life to survive with the contribution of meals and lacking society will need
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 and give them is important to help others.
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