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It is thought by some that its better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both side of the argument.

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Some
people
 think that it's better to live in a city rather than others believe which country life is better.
This
 argues based on the expectations of the public which are facilities, advantages, privacy and peace in the living areas.
People
 who are living in the cities have a chance to use all facilities already provided by the government which are garbage services and infrastructures
such
 as the Internet and supplies.
Moreover
, not only the most compelling advantage is being easy to reach those facilities but
also
people
 being in contact with society fast even in their leisure
time
.
Furthermore
, desolation by living in the countryside ensures privacy better than a flat. While considering the cities which are never sleeping, living out of the centre provides noiseless and crowd-less
time
 when
people
 want to spend
time
 by lonely or want quality rest
time
 after a hard work day. To sum up, both locations for living, give different opportunities and advantages to the public but differences between humans missout by the
people
 who create
this
 argument.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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