Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center. Explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community Describe the possible effects on the local people if the center closes.

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Dear Sir/Mam , I am Rahul palette stays in the Vastrapur district. I'm writing

this

letter with regard to the information mentioned in the notice board of the council office about closing a sports and leisure

centre

in the area to save expenses. In the vastrapur

area

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there is only one

such

centre

which runs sports and leisure activities.Generally, at weekends I and my friends take up some time from our tight schedule and

make up

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to meet in the

centre

to play games

such

as tennis and football as it is the most prime time in the whole week for us.

First

I want to draw your attention towards the membership list of the

centre

as around half of the city is involved in any of the sports and leisure activities runs by the

centre

as it is only one place which helps to escape from tight schedule it will really very difficult for the people if the

centre

is closed And just to inform that there is no search other alternatives in the city,

moreover

, garden are

also

barren land and are of very small size . I would like to request you to please take my request into consideration and keep the

centre

running as it is. Kind Regards, Rahul Palit.

Submitted by Juhipalit1996 on Wed Nov 09 2022

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

214 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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