Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center. Explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community Describe the possible effects on the local people if the center closes.

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Dear Sir/Mam , I am Rahul palette stays in the Vastrapur district. I'm writing
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letter with regard to the information mentioned in the notice board of the council office about closing a sports and leisure
centre
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in the area to save expenses. In the vastrapur
area
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there is only one
such
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centre
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which runs sports and leisure activities.Generally, at weekends I and my friends take up some time from our tight schedule and
make up
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to meet in the
centre
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to play games
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as tennis and football as it is the most prime time in the whole week for us.
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I want to draw your attention towards the membership list of the
centre
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as around half of the city is involved in any of the sports and leisure activities runs by the
centre
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as it is only one place which helps to escape from tight schedule it will really very difficult for the people if the
centre
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is closed And just to inform that there is no search other alternatives in the city,
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, garden are
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barren land and are of very small size . I would like to request you to please take my request into consideration and keep the
centre
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running as it is. Kind Regards, Rahul Palit.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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