Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture below illustrates how
plastic
bottles
is
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recycled. Overall,there are nine steps in the process of recycling
bottles
, from
initial
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start of rubbish to
eventual
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reproduced goods. The
plastic
bottles
are collected, sorted,broken down and
finally
become products which are sold in the stores. The whole progress begins with collecting unwanted goods. Transported with a large trunk,
plastic
bottles
which are of value are sorted in a recycling
center
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and
the
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compressed into blocks .
Then
the
bottles
are crushed into small pieces by two large gears and fall into a large container
which
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is filled with
much
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water Following
this
, the washed
plastic
is turned into
plastic
pellets . After that,
raw
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material
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are formed by heating the
pllets
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pellets
under a certain temperature. In the end ,different
various
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of
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products are made from
the
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recycled materials. When people throw away the useless stuff, a new recycled circle begins.
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