Some people believe that children should be allowed to choose what subjects to study at school.Others argue that everyone should study the same subjects. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, society is divided into the best method for
children
's studies. Obviously, many believe that children
should choose what matters they should study
, while, others argue students
must have the same subjects
. Increasingly, it has become a controversial topic and parents have different opinions, so, I'd like to add my own point of view and provide a good discussion for both sides.
Firstly
, around the world ,there are several methods of children
's study
and to enrich this
discussion I'm going to bring up an example from Brazil's academic structure. In fact, we have a recognised education in Brazil and, until now students
often start from kindergarten to high school studying the same matters, no matter if they want to be a doctor or an engineer as an adult. According to an article written by Veja S.A newspaper, around 60% of parents desire their children
could choose the subjects
that they would like to study
at least on
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the
high school, Correct article usage
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in addition
, in my ,opinion it would be the right way, given that it is the last
step after them starting university life.
Secondly
, being a technical choice, students
will follow their professional proposal from the first
day in high school. For instance
, those people who would like to be a doctor,
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study
subjects
such
as,
math, biology, and so. Indeed, starting an academic experience in the same way as a professional dream could increase the chance of success. Remove the comma
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Thus
, I totally agree with this
statement, then
students
will beat their goals quickly and society will have more capable professionals.
In conclusion, tracking my opinion, I advocate for students
to study
the same subjects
until elementary. In order to live in an interconnected world, as soon our kids find the professional way, the better it would be for humanity.Submitted by murilo.siqueira2012 on
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